Descriptive essay/Australia values
Australia is an attractive country that occupies the territory of the smallest continent on earth. People in Australia are very friendly and tolerant; this is due to the interesting mix of cultures that live there. 80 percent of the people in Australia speak English.
Australia was inhabited by aborigines in the past, but now, the most of the 20 million people who live there are immigrants or descendants of immigrants. Because of that, people in Australia are very tolerant to different cultures and races. Immigrants have also helped to make Australia a rich and prosperous country. People in Australia love to work hard and are very competitive.
Moreover , is very easy to make new friend in Australia, because Australians are very friendly and tolerant. There are people from all around the world and everybody seems to get along. This shows that they have a modern mentality and that they are open to diversity and that Australians believe in equality.
Another value of Australian people is honesty. In the past, Australia was a penitentiary island, and people now want to show that they have lost the connection with crime. Nowadays people in Australia are known by their love to work and their low crime rate.
To sum up, we can see that Australia is a nice place to live and to work. There, you can find new friends everyday and get to know people from very different cultures, knowing that you will be respected and treated with equality. It also offers a great opportunity for people who want to make a life there, because of their job offer and the support that immigrants are given by the government.
viernes, 29 de febrero de 2008
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Your essay is good. However, you wrote the paragraphs in a different order from the one presented in the introduction and included one paragraph about something you didn't mention before. You also used very nice words and made your essay easy to understand. Good job
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